duly notedombligoReport 2012-03-07 05:40:37I guess it is a “Dark and Stormy Night” where you are? and was wondering what you think?«1» But as a nit picky point, you jumped between 1st and 3rd person a lot. Indian xxx hd There’s literary times to do this but rarely in the same chapter or especially paragraph to paragraph.ellie1993Report 2012-03-07 08:21:34Haha i do get into the story abit… and was wondering what you think?«1» whoopsies… and was wondering what you think?«1» 5 comments«1»ellie1993Report 2012-03-07 17:02:17yeah i do tend to write like this anyway i like to have different perspectives on how a character reacts or behaves its a little weird i know. …anonymous readerReport 2012-03-07 10:37:49I liked it. There’s literary times to do this but rarely in the same chapter or especially paragraph to paragraph.ellie1993Report 2012-03-07 08:21:34Haha i do get into the story abit… 5 comments«1»ellie1993Report 2012-03-07 17:02:17yeah i do tend to write like this anyway i like to have different perspectives on how a character reacts or behaves its a little weird i know. …anonymous readerReport 2012-03-07 10:37:49I liked it. whoopsies… duly notedombligoReport 2012-03-07 05:40:37I guess it is a “Dark and Stormy Night” where you are? There’s literary times to do this but rarely in the same chapter or especially paragraph to paragraph.ellie1993Report 2012-03-07 08:21:34Haha i do get into the story abit…
