You have talent.READERReport 2008-02-16 23:00:39I hate people who dis others for what they think is “poor writing.” I loved the story. I loved that show! Indian xxx hd I loved that show! 8 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2008-10-28 23:29:24WHOA it totally took me halfway through the story that this was about Thunderbirds. Unfortunately, I didn’t really want to make it sexual so I stopped after I figured it out. Keep up your writing because you have better grammar than most people on here.READERReport 2006-09-22 19:40:57the sex scene is like last and all of the first part is shitREADERReport 2006-04-22 18:15:04I’d prefer to see something that wasnt erotica from you. I loved that show! You have talent.READERReport 2008-02-16 23:00:39I hate people who dis others for what they think is “poor writing.” I loved the story. Unfortunately, I didn’t really want to make it sexual so I stopped after I figured it out. Unfortunately, I didn’t really want to make it sexual so I stopped after I figured it out. 8 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2008-10-28 23:29:24WHOA it totally took me halfway through the story that this was about Thunderbirds. I’m sorry you got such bad creds from these perverts… Kudos for using the show though!Anonymous readerReport 2008-05-23 20:54:51It wasn’t that bad. It was a little long winded, but the sex scenes and the details through out the s tory were great. Unfortunately, I didn’t really want to
