I think you need to proof read, missing words, misspelled words, ect..anonymous readerReport 2012-09-27 12:10:21god, i’d love for you to add another male character. Of course, this is a fantasy story so such liberal creative literary license is acceptable. Indian hot xxx That fact is why it’s so difficult to comment. That fact is why it’s so difficult to comment. adding another male would make it so fucking hot. adding another male would make it so fucking hot. That fact is why it’s so difficult to comment. love this series thoughanonymous readerReport 2012-05-08 22:20:38Please come out with the next chapteranonymous readerReport 2012-05-07 05:06:45common man when r u publishing next part«12» I think you need to proof read, missing words, misspelled words, ect..anonymous readerReport 2012-09-27 12:10:21god, i’d love for you to add another male character. 9 comments«12»Dudley DowrongReport 2018-06-21 10:42:49want to comment on the abusive treatment of Anna & CJ but not sure what to say. Usually such traits start exhibiting such behavior in their 20’s unless there has been an abusive father or other authoritian figure guiding such behavior verbally or physically. Still a great story line & getting better with each chapter.Anonymous readerReport 2014-01-26 16:07:19Who is Mercedes? 9 comments«12»Dudley DowrongReport 2018-06-21 10:42:49want to comment on the abusive treatment of Anna & CJ but not sure what to say. That fact is why it’s so difficult to comment.
