Except for submarines and then there is nothing but targets.tjgorlaReport 2009-10-23 16:32:03great story thanks for sharing.Anonymous readerReport 2009-10-23 16:15:52The run-on and confusing sentences made it a hard read. They’re SHIPS not boats. Indian XXX I’m not asking for impeccable grammar, but it was just bad.robbiexxReport 2009-10-23 16:05:57AUTHOR RAMLES ON TOO MUCK. HE HUGGED THE WOMAN AND WALKED OUT THE DOOR IS A BAD BREAK IN SEQUENCE«1» The words don’t clearly describe what’s going on. They’re SHIPS not boats. The words don’t clearly describe what’s going on. Except for submarines and then there is nothing but targets.tjgorlaReport 2009-10-23 16:32:03great story thanks for sharing.Anonymous readerReport 2009-10-23 16:15:52The run-on and confusing sentences made it a hard read. You had a whole paragraph consisting of a single sentence. They’re SHIPS not boats. You had a whole paragraph consisting of a single sentence. 5 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2009-10-24 22:20:49qine naneReal NavyReport 2009-10-23 18:43:36Navy Man, my ass. I’m not asking for impeccable grammar, but it was just bad.robbiexxReport 2009-10-23 16:05:57AUTHOR RAMLES ON TOO MUCK. HE HUGGED THE WOMAN AND WALKED OUT THE DOOR IS A BAD BREAK IN SEQUENCE«1» Boats are for bathtubs and rubber duckys! I’m not asking for impeccable grammar, but it was just bad.robbiexxReport 2009-10-23 16:05:57AUTHOR RAMLES ON TOO MUCK. Boats are for bathtubs and rubber duckys! 5 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2009-10-24 22:20:49qine naneReal NavyReport 2009-10-23 18:43:36Navy Man, my ass.
