You’ve earned this NEGATIVE VOTE.anonymous readerReport 2011-04-12 21:46:16to short it could have been a hole lot better it a great start to a story u just need more detail and u have a great hit.«1» keep it going but make it longer as your just starting to get hard reading itanonymous readerReport 2011-04-12 23:18:40So he’s a fag. Indian xxx hd 4 comments«1»demck23Report 2011-04-18 12:58:50good story line just have more action & have him do more to her . have her doing moreanonymous readerReport 2011-04-13 11:16:19gave you a positive but you could have done alot more with it. You’ve earned this NEGATIVE VOTE.anonymous readerReport 2011-04-12 21:46:16to short it could have been a hole lot better it a great start to a story u just need more detail and u have a great hit.«1» What an asshole. Just wonderful. Could have been a great story but you fucking blew it. keep it going but make it longer as your just starting to get hard reading itanonymous readerReport 2011-04-12 23:18:40So he’s a fag. 4 comments«1»demck23Report 2011-04-18 12:58:50good story line just have more action & have him do more to her . Could have been a great story but you fucking blew it. 4 comments«1»demck23Report 2011-04-18 12:58:50good story line just have more action & have him do more to her . keep it going but make it longer as your just starting to get hard reading itanonymous
