Maybe you will improve in a few years. keep at it its not easy to please this lot!!!READERReport 2007-04-07 13:53:48I can overlook the bad English and horrible spelling but you shouldn’t be able to write a story on the back of a post card. Indian XXX … 8 comments«12»READERReport 2007-04-07 21:18:59crap but i fink u could probs improve soon. I’m not talking about your story just your English.«12» I’m not talking about your story just your English.«12» keep at it its not easy to please this lot!!!READERReport 2007-04-07 13:53:48I can overlook the bad English and horrible spelling but you shouldn’t be able to write a story on the back of a post card. … keep at it its not easy to please this lot!!!READERReport 2007-04-07 13:53:48I can overlook the bad English and horrible spelling but you shouldn’t be able to write a story on the back of a post card. … way way way too fucking shortREADERReport 2007-04-07 10:20:46Yeah, punctuation and spelling. way way way too fucking shortREADERReport 2007-04-07 10:20:46Yeah, punctuation and spelling. Fix ’em.READERReport 2007-04-06 23:39:57DUDE MORE PRACTICE I GIVE IT A 3/10 MAKE EM LONGER MORE DETAILEZREADERReport 2007-04-06 14:54:25You need an English class real bad. I’m not talking about your story just your English.«12» Fix ’em.READERReport 2007-04-06 23:39:57DUDE MORE PRACTICE I GIVE IT A 3/10 MAKE EM LONGER MORE DETAILEZREADERReport 2007-04-06 14:54:25You need an English class real bad.
