I can’t stop reading.Anonymous readerReport 2014-09-08 06:18:54What happened to Marcus?Anonymous readerReport 2014-08-16 16:05:08I love all of the chapters and I hope you don’t let anyone tell you otherwise
ethanschoenheitanonymous readerReport 2013-07-20 14:02:50As someone that understands the storytelling style you are using I will say not bad. 10 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2015-03-10 20:17:41You’re doing great don’t stop. Indian XXX I am not sure on how i feel on the changes you have made yet but and interesting plot and campaign. Keep up the good work.«12» I am not sure on how i feel on the changes you have made yet but and interesting plot and campaign. I am not sure on how i feel on the changes you have made yet but and interesting plot and campaign. I am not sure on how i feel on the changes you have made yet but and interesting plot and campaign. Great story I completely understand what your saying about it being from his point of view and so we get what he is thinking even if that is alot about sindee. Great story I completely understand what your saying about it being from his point of view and so we get what he is thinking even if that is alot about sindee.
