The story will flow better if you do these things. I need a big bad boy to help me out.anonymous readerReport 2013-08-05 22:19:03please make a part 3 !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1anonymous readerReport 2013-08-05 13:38:20Please leave a blank line between paragraphs to make it easier to read. Indian XXX I need a big bad boy to help me out.anonymous readerReport 2013-08-05 22:19:03please make a part 3 !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1anonymous readerReport 2013-08-05 13:38:20Please leave a blank line between paragraphs to make it easier to read. The story will flow better if you do these things. I need a big bad boy to help me out.anonymous readerReport 2013-08-05 22:19:03please make a part 3 !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1anonymous readerReport 2013-08-05 13:38:20Please leave a blank line between paragraphs to make it easier to read. The story will flow better if you do these things. Good luck.anonymous readerReport 2013-08-05 12:19:03Good second part make a part 3 if you havnt already«1» Also make a new paragraph whenever a different person is speaking to avoid confusion. I need a big bad boy to help me out.anonymous readerReport 2013-08-05 22:19:03please make a part 3 !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1anonymous readerReport 2013-08-05 13:38:20Please leave a blank line between paragraphs to make it easier to read. I need a big bad boy to help me out.anonymous readerReport 2013-08-05 22:19:03please make a part 3 !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1anonymous readerReport 2013-08-05 13:38:20Please leave a blank line between paragraphs to make it easier to read.
