But didn’t like the Cliffhangers at the end though. Which in fact was rather annoying and I had to skip most of that scene since you kept using “She” to acknowledge both women. Indian XXX While my work is far from perfect and I do tend to make mistakes while writing, I do however go back and do some editing and get someone to proofread for me. that being said I know this is a work of fiction but you raced through several things that should have had more of a build up. that being said I know this is a work of fiction but you raced through several things that should have had more of a build up. You should had added more parts.Anonymous readerReport 2016-06-30 21:55:58Please do more the best stories I’ve ever read PleaseMerc098Report 2016-03-31 08:25:36ok so apart from the spelling and grammar errors, your story has much to be desired. You really need to add more chapters.Anonymous readerReport 2016-07-09 02:19:27Hot that all of them got pregnant with his baby. Which in fact was rather annoying and I had to skip most of that scene since you kept using “She” to acknowledge both women. so I will give this story series an overall 5/10. at one part in these last few chapters during the threesome with His girlfriend and cousin I could not tell
