It’s my first story so gettinng used to the writing portion. Indian XXX Keep going just slow down.«1» Your doing fine, don’t give up. When you get this far continue on with your story as you just dropped it off a cliff the first time. Just a little harder to do proof reads when you’re on a kindle touch.anonymous readerReport 2013-05-21 11:46:07It really needs a rewrite. Your doing fine, don’t give up. When you get this far continue on with your story as you just dropped it off a cliff the first time. (countrycadillac)blonde_kidReport 2013-05-21 11:51:51Thanks for the feedback. SLO DOWN, take it easy and start over. Keep going just slow down.«1» It’s my first story so gettinng used to the writing portion. Your doing fine, don’t give up. (countrycadillac)blonde_kidReport 2013-05-21 11:51:51Thanks for the feedback. SLO DOWN, take it easy and start over. Take it to the final phase and then end it. Take it to the final phase and then end it. Take it to the final phase and then end it. Keep going just slow down.«1» You have the idea in the back of your head you just don’t know how to tell your fingers to type it in. Spell check please, and greater story formulation wouldn’t hurt.anonymous readerReport 2013-05-21 06:38:58Take time to proof your stories.
